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was that a hawk I heard? Good short :)

good animation, bad characters

Your animation quality was quite good, but sadly it is the only thing that makes you flash worth watching.

My biggest problem is that the characters are super cliché, I've seen them a million times before, and I just tired of them. I'm shur their is a lot to your characters I don't know that would make them unique, BUT it wasn't shown here so I instantly don't care about ether one of them.

Also on a technical side, why 18 FPS? it seems like a really odd (and low) amount to use for a fighting animation. your movement would have flowed a lot better if you just bumped it up to a standard setting. 24FPS is a standard movie speed, while 30 FPS is stuff like TV, there is a really important reason we use these numbers, so unless 18FPS was important reason, I say stick to the norm.

Overall good job, no matter how much I bicker, its not like I have anything better than this out right now, so really good job.

Alamus responds:

Yeah, this animation is short and doesn't show character development. All that is done in the comics. And i know 18 fps is pretty weird but its better than 15 and I was testing the waters. Next time i'm going to try 24, but the low frame rate is due to the fact of lack of TIME. I don't have the time to do a 30 fps animation in 4 weeks. Not on top of video game development and just needing to eat, sleep, and take poops.

But yeah, you make great points, and I totally respect them, but I was just happy to get this thing "done". Its not polished, but it shows the fighting win. Again, for story development you can check out the comics since that's where its at. :)

thanks for watching.

Loved it!

its a awesome build up to a awesome pay off. yeah its simple but the good audio/music timing and selection, makes it work for the ending.

I love that its two porcupines

good work!

kojay responds:

thanks man and long time no text

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This beat is so good I put some birds to it. Thank you

jmerk800 responds:

haha thanks, saw the short. Love it.

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