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you think your college costs a lot!!! mine is almost $25,000 a year, and thats after i chiped it down with scolarships and crap from almost $40,000. Oh why do I think its worth it, I don't even know sometimes. well your short was awesome I feel the same way in a lot of my classes, good luck!
There really needs to be some sort of regulation on how much universities can charge. I'm pretty sure your uni doesn't need $25,000 per student per year to survive. :P
My community college, while not as big as a uni, had $80 per credit hour classes, and it was so much nicer than UMKC and the teachers even seemed more knowledgeable.
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well it was okay, but you your right it is random crap. what i suggest is first come up with a story line of some sort, this is important because it keeps the viewer interested, even the most random movies that are susseful have some sort of theme or story. also your file shouldn't be 2MG to fix that you should take your audio, and change it to event instead of stream then clip it off at the end of your short, the file size (and load time) will go way down. also if you want to colab. with some one improve your skills first, so your partner wont kill you.
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IT NEED SOUND!!! the animation was very nice though:)
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sorry, this wasn't funny. nothing interesting happens. nothing makes sense a all. and the voice for the turtle was just bad. the worst part of it all was that you told me the whole story before it even happened in you authors comment, sorry this just sucked!
IF YOU WANT TO MAKE IT BETTER first try to make a story worth watching. Change the dumb ass voice "derr, oh i don't know Jorg". it okay to have a retarted sounding voice, but come on guys back off a little. and work on timing... a lot, that dollar bit went on five times longer than it should. so unless you make so major changes don't make anymore!!! I can't understant how this got above a 2.3
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I think over all it was good, the only two things That I had a problem with was the text at the end went way two fast for me to read, so the puch ling was kind of lost for me and also the NIN song(which is a great choice) needs to be cut way down in lenght, I guessing that you just put in the whol song when the viewer will only ear about the firsy 30s, cut the song down and the file size won't be 6.7MB and the load will be a lot faster. So yeah over all, that was some good stuff
Yeah, I spose I could tweak the song down, I put it in there full length more so so people could listen to it, but I spose...
no there all wrong!!!!
it doesn't need to be longer at all, the only people are saying that is because they want.. something, more. what I think would help a baagilion is if you make the graphics way more amazing. The Emo kid can stay the same, but gives us some awesome backgrounds, more movment in the animation and it would help sooooooooo much if at the end if we saw all the dead emo kids in a pile, we know its there and I think thats all a sight we want to see. Sound was great too
I say try it one more time. good job too
Okay, I'll consider remaking it. The pile of emo kids is a great idea. But I suck at backgrounds. D:
One question though: What "more movement" can I add? I can't add more movement to it if it'd just end up looking unnecessary. It'd seem unnatural.
WOOOOOOOOOOOoooo..............
So I didn't think it was passibal but someboddy manged to get all but three. anime clechies in one short little movie. the three you were missing were:space travile, Some sort of monster to aid you in battle, and when two people kiss it starts raining. BUT still withought thoes three you managed to produce a regeartege pile of anime crap. SO THIS IS HOW I SCORED YOU. Sound =1 bad sounds, Plot= -3 horribal horibal plot, Animation= 7 on the flip side I liked your animation skills, there good. maybe this is why I'm so harsh, good skills, bad story, get a good story and you could be great! so over all 7+1-3=5 so there you go, 5 stars, which in my book is 2/5.
Woot!!!
this makes me want to play Phoenix right games now, although now that I'v seen this, the game just doesen't seem like it can live up to it.
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