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I think over all it was good, the only two things That I had a problem with was the text at the end went way two fast for me to read, so the puch ling was kind of lost for me and also the NIN song(which is a great choice) needs to be cut way down in lenght, I guessing that you just put in the whol song when the viewer will only ear about the firsy 30s, cut the song down and the file size won't be 6.7MB and the load will be a lot faster. So yeah over all, that was some good stuff