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[Zelda Da HO]

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I think over all it was good, the only two things That I had a problem with was the text at the end went way two fast for me to read, so the puch ling was kind of lost for me and also the NIN song(which is a great choice) needs to be cut way down in lenght, I guessing that you just put in the whol song when the viewer will only ear about the firsy 30s, cut the song down and the file size won't be 6.7MB and the load will be a lot faster. So yeah over all, that was some good stuff

helladamn1337 responds:

Yeah, I spose I could tweak the song down, I put it in there full length more so so people could listen to it, but I spose...

[Frame by Frame mania one]

its a nice use of flash...

but theirs noting there for viewers to chew on, if there was something in your animation that gaves us a real reason to watch it it would a lot better, like a story or message or something. all in all I know how time consuming frame by frame gets so, you get awarded on that, but if you make more... well I think you know what to do.

awildeground responds:

Thats exactly what my mate said. Next time = story line!

[Emo Factor 3]

no there all wrong!!!!

it doesn't need to be longer at all, the only people are saying that is because they want.. something, more. what I think would help a baagilion is if you make the graphics way more amazing. The Emo kid can stay the same, but gives us some awesome backgrounds, more movment in the animation and it would help sooooooooo much if at the end if we saw all the dead emo kids in a pile, we know its there and I think thats all a sight we want to see. Sound was great too
I say try it one more time. good job too

Yotam responds:

Okay, I'll consider remaking it. The pile of emo kids is a great idea. But I suck at backgrounds. D:

One question though: What "more movement" can I add? I can't add more movement to it if it'd just end up looking unnecessary. It'd seem unnatural.